I was watching
my new pet tortoise in the living room. He was very funny, he kept coming in
and out but barely moved at all. I chewed on my orange wondering when my friend
would arrive. All of a sudden I heard the sound of Timmy’s whistle. I went to
the window and waved at him, he waved back as he came along the pavement very slowly.
I giggled because Timmy reminded me of a tortoise, he was even wearing his
green tortoise shell t-shirt and his green trousers which made him look even
more like a tortoise.
I really liked the way you compared the tortoise to Timmy - a clever idea. I imagine Timmy with his shoulders hunched like a shell around his neck!
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