Wednesday, 4 September 2013

100wc Week#1 suddenly I heard a crack

I was playing hide and seek in the woods and suddenly I heard a crack. I looked behind me and some of the sticks were broken. There were footprints and they led in to the bushes. I wondered if I should follow them or stay in my hiding place. I made up my mind, I was going to follow the footprints. I followed the trail deep in to the bushes until I came to a hole in the ground. An animal jumped out, it was yellow and had fangs. I screamed and backed away, but it came closer and closer.
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8 comments:

  1. cooper5 September 2013 at 08:16

    the strory will spoke out i hope the character is okay i really liked the idea you went for.

    great job princess baker

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  2. Unknown5 September 2013 at 21:25

    Hey Jean, Well done on your first piece of writing. Good job! x

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  3. The Fairy ClothesMother6 September 2013 at 09:08

    Jean fab writing! Jacob wonders what happens next!

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  4. Anonymous7 September 2013 at 19:37

    Oh my Princess Well Done!!

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    1. Unknown18 September 2013 at 08:20

      Thanks. Have you seen my new one? Jean

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    2. Unknown18 September 2013 at 08:23

      Thanks. Have you seen my new one? Jean

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